Hey Charlotte, Thank you for checking out my post and commenting on it. I really wanted to add a rhyme as well but it was, indeed, difficult to stick with the right syllables. The people on the beach have absolutely no connection with me, it was just an image I added to match the line "Laughter everywhere". Kind regards, Roneeza
Kia ora Roneeza,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team.
What a great haiku you have created! I know it can be tricky to stick to the exact syllables but you have done it perfectly!
It sounds like you have had a really lovely summer. Who are the people on the beach?
Keep up the awesome work!
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte
Hey Charlotte,
DeleteThank you for checking out my post and commenting on it. I really wanted to add a rhyme as well but it was, indeed, difficult to stick with the right syllables. The people on the beach have absolutely no connection with me, it was just an image I added to match the line "Laughter everywhere".
Kind regards,
Roneeza