One night I was reading a book, and a magic rocking horse came into my open window.It was really small.
When it landed it grew almost as tall as me.The magic horse can talk."My name is Lily,"she said with a smile.
"Would you like a ride,? I can take you around the world," she said. "Um...no thank you,I am too tired ".
" Its time for me to go to bed," "Good night,"said Lily.When I woke up Lily was still there and doing magic.
Later we sang quietly together.
L.I.-W.A.L.T...write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I can do this when I write a story about the magic horse.
Hi Roneeza, I really liked your story. You used your punctuation really well, but at the start of a sentence after someone is talking, start a new line. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Roneeza, I really liked your story. You used your punctuation really well, but at the start of a sentence after someone is talking, start a new line. Keep up the great work!
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